Feedback?

Hell of a Night Campaign

The feedback was more positive than negative for my idea. The dancers in my video idea was just that I needed a second element, something to add to the video. The rapper performing and the girl dancing was not enough to have a strong idea.
Apart from this the everyone thought it was visually exciting and interesting.

I videoed one of my feed back questions.

Until We Bleed Campaign

What they loved:

• Two people running to one another, a lovely narrative.
• The idea of plants being used with water in the studio with colourful lighting.
• How the song has the sounds of water and by using water it would tie in nicely.

What they were not sure about:

• The idea of a band was strange because there was not clear instruments used in the song, and it would be stronger with one solo artist.
• The idea of using water is unlikely because it would be difficult to work with around all the technology. It is a liability considering you cannot completely control water as well (it would not always do what I wanted it to do)
• The idea of two lovers running together might be a little cheesy if not done properly. Also the idea of corn fields and running through fields to find each other would be hard to shoot because it is quite an 'American' influenced idea. Reason being, we could not get access to a corn field as easily because it is all private land.

Toxic Campaign

What they loved:

• The idea of using a girl and glitter working with the beat of the song. Eliza gave me an idea of placing glitter on speakers, so the glitter would bounce to the beat.

What they were not sure about:

• How the girl in this was similar to the Hell of a Night campaign. I realised this while pitching that I was very stuck on the idea of using girl covered in glitter and using contemporary ballet. I see how this does not work because its almost like I was struggling for another idea, but I genuinely just liked the idea of glitter.
• There was not much supporting my idea, and while pitching I noticed there was nothing strong about it.