Success With Re-Pitching

Our Presentation

Success! They like the changes we have made to the idea, but there are still things we have to work on. Here is video of us re-pitching the idea to Mike and Luke.

Luke's Feedback

• The water will be much more hassle than it is worth for only two shots. After discussing this with the group we realised it would also be very annoying considering it would make our dancer wet, our artist wet and our set wet.
• We need more performance elements by re-using the corridor. But we can not use the corridor shots throughout the video if our artist enters the room. This means that we might need to make the artist separate from the man in the room with the girl. First thoughts, we want to still have our performer as the man in the room,  but by making the man in the room mysterious we could then at the end of the music video un vale that it is in fact our artist with the girl.